How my Doc2 will handle its thesis

I believe that my Doc 1 handled its thesis the way it says to in the "Little Brown Compact Book". I say that because, what better my Doc 1's thesis summarizes the main points of the paper as a whole. My thesis is clear and flows correctly, therefore its understandable. A thesis statement allows my paper to be more clear and in that way the points are clear. I believe it flows well within my introductory paragraph to specify my subject and points, and implies my attitude. Read my thesis and let me know what you think!